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[Bug 584492] Re: Grammar improvement required
** Branch linked: lp:ubuntu-manual
Grammar improvement required
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: Confirmed
Chp 6 p120
Ubuntu uses the Linux file system structure based on a series of folders in
the root directory.
Not ungrammatical as such, but awkward, needing a separation between "Linux file system structure" and "based on". Also "system structure" is a bit redundant.
Suggestion: "Ubuntu uses the Linux file system, which is based on a series of folders in the root directory."