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[Bug 584460] Re: Rephrase "some things that work very differently" (page 9)

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From: Andrew <rugby471@xxxxxxxxx>
Date: Mon, 24 May 2010 06:59:04 -0000
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Something like:

distinct differences

or major differences <--(I don't like this one though)

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Rephrase "some things that work very differently" (page 9)
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/584460
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: In Progress

Bug description:
In the below sentence, "some things that work very differently" should be rephrased to "differences". As well as this being the antonym of the word previously used (similarities) it is a lot less confusing and simpler.

You will no doubt notice many similarities to both Microsoft Windows and Mac OSX, as well as some things that work very differently.

becomes

You will no doubt notice many similarities to both Microsoft Windows and Mac OSX, as well as some differences.