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[Marc Stewart <marc.c.stewart@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Public bug reported:

Rev. 788
Ch. 1, section "The Live CD" (p. 12, PDF p. 14)
Type: grammar

Once your computer finds the Live CD and after a quick loading screen,
you will [be] presented with the “Welcome” screen.

There's an argument for a comma after "Live CD" too.

** Affects: ubuntu-manual
     Importance: Undecided
         Status: New

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Missing "be" in "you will [be] presented"
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/585238
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: New

Bug description:
Rev. 788
Ch. 1, section "The Live CD" (p. 12, PDF p. 14)
Type: grammar

Once your computer finds the Live CD and after a quick loading screen,
you will [be] presented with the “Welcome” screen.

There's an argument for a comma after "Live CD" too.