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     Assignee: (unassigned) => Chris Woollard (cwoollard)

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       Status: New => In Progress

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
       Status: In Progress => Fix Committed

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Comma splice on p.19
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/585292
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: Fix Committed

Bug description:
Rev. 788
Ch.1, § "Log in automatically", p. 19 (PDF p. 21)
Type: grammar

Manual has a comma splice (before "however"):
This makes your login experience quicker and more convenient, however, if privacy or security are important to you, this option is not recommended.

Either the comma before "however" should be a full stop or semicolon, or the appropriate conjunction, "but", should be employed:
This makes your login experience quicker and more convenient, but if privacy or security are important to you, this option is not recommended.