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[Marc Stewart <marc.c.stewart@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Public bug reported:

Rev. 788
Ch.1, § "Log in automatically", p. 19 (PDF p. 21)
Type: grammar

Manual has a comma splice (before "however"):
This makes your login experience quicker and more convenient, however, if privacy or security are important to you, this option is not recommended.

Either the comma before "however" should be a full stop or semicolon, or the appropriate conjunction, "but", should be employed:
This makes your login experience quicker and more convenient, but if privacy or security are important to you, this option is not recommended.

** Affects: ubuntu-manual
     Importance: Undecided
         Status: New

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Comma splice on p.19
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Bug description:
Rev. 788
Ch.1, § "Log in automatically", p. 19 (PDF p. 21)
Type: grammar

Manual has a comma splice (before "however"):
This makes your login experience quicker and more convenient, however, if privacy or security are important to you, this option is not recommended.

Either the comma before "however" should be a full stop or semicolon, or the appropriate conjunction, "but", should be employed:
This makes your login experience quicker and more convenient, but if privacy or security are important to you, this option is not recommended.