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** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
     Assignee: (unassigned) => Kevin Godby (godbyk)

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
    Milestone: None => edition-2

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
       Status: New => In Progress

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Comma splice on p.33
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/585364
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: In Progress

Bug description:
Rev. 788
Ch. 2, § "Panels", p. 33 (PDF p. 35)
Type: grammar

Manual has a comma splice (before "however")
By default these buttons will display directional arrows, however, you can select the Arrows on hide buttons option to remove the arrows and just have plain buttons.

Options:
Replace "however," with "though" or "but"
Replace comma with full stop or a semicolon.