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[Bug 585361] Re: Suggest comma before "such as" on p.32


** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
     Assignee: (unassigned) => Kevin Godby (godbyk)

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
    Milestone: None => edition-2

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
       Status: New => In Progress

Suggest comma before "such as" on p.32
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: In Progress

Bug description:
Rev. 788
Ch. 2, § "Customizing your desktop", p. 32 (PDF p. 34)
Type: copy edit suggestion

Manual has:
Now [...] let’s take a look at customizing some of its features such as modifying the behavior of your panels, or changing the look and feel of your desktop.

Since the sentence could end after "features", this particular use of "such as" is better preceded by a comma, such as it is at many other points in the manual.