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[Zachary Pletan <zpletan@xxxxxxx>]

Public bug reported:

I am reading the Ubuntu Manual v. 788 (as part of the "Show us ya bugs"
initiative), and in Chapter 3, on p. 83, I believe I have discovered
both a typo and a couple of comma splices.

Each one of you accounts will have a set of icons to go with it, these
are displayed on the left hand size of the “Social broadcast message”
window. The set of icons that goes with an account has a background
color, each one of these icons allows you to do tasks for that specific
account.

Note that here "you accounts" are mentioned, and also note the comma
splices after "go with it" and "has a background color".

** Affects: ubuntu-manual
     Importance: Undecided
         Status: New

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typo/grammar errors on p. 83
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/585671
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Bug description:
I am reading the Ubuntu Manual v. 788 (as part of the "Show us ya bugs" initiative), and in Chapter 3, on p. 83, I believe I have discovered both a typo and a couple of comma splices.

Each one of you accounts will have a set of icons to go with it, these are displayed on the left hand size of the “Social broadcast message” window. The set of icons that goes with an account has a background color, each one of these icons allows you to do tasks for that specific account.

Note that here "you accounts" are mentioned, and also note the comma splices after "go with it" and "has a background color".