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[Marc Stewart <marc.c.stewart@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Public bug reported:

Rev. 788
Ch. 3, § "Bookmarking a page", p. 58 (PDF p. 60)
Type: redundancy

Manual has:
If you have navigated to a web page and would like to bookmark it for future visits, you will need to add the page as a bookmark.

The first part of the sentence mentions bookmarking the page, making the
second part redundant.

Suggestion:
If you would like to save a web page's location for future visits, you can bookmark the page.

** Affects: ubuntu-manual
     Importance: Undecided
         Status: New

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Redundancy in "Bookmarking a page", p. 58
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/585936
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: New

Bug description:
Rev. 788
Ch. 3, § "Bookmarking a page", p. 58 (PDF p. 60)
Type: redundancy

Manual has:
If you have navigated to a web page and would like to bookmark it for future visits, you will need to add the page as a bookmark.

The first part of the sentence mentions bookmarking the page, making the second part redundant.

Suggestion:
If you would like to save a web page's location for future visits, you can bookmark the page.