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[Marc Stewart <marc.c.stewart@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Public bug reported:

Rev. 788
Ch. 3, § "Reading and composing email", p. 60 (PDF p. 62)
Types: style; clarity

Manual has the warning note:
You do not need to use Evolution if you are using a webmail system, such as Yahoo Mail, Hotmail, or Gmail. To access these services, use the Firefox web browser to access them on the web.

"To access them/these" is only needed once. This also reads a bit like
readers shouldn't try to use Evolution with webmail.

Suggestion:
Although Evolution can be used with many webmail systems, such as Yahoo! Mail, Hotmail, and Gmail, you may prefer to use the Firefox web browser to access them via the web.

** Affects: ubuntu-manual
     Importance: Undecided
         Status: New

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"To access" repetition, and highlighting possibilities, p.60
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/586308
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: New

Bug description:
Rev. 788
Ch. 3, § "Reading and composing email", p. 60 (PDF p. 62)
Types: style; clarity

Manual has the warning note:
You do not need to use Evolution if you are using a webmail system, such as Yahoo Mail, Hotmail, or Gmail. To access these services, use the Firefox web browser to access them on the web.

"To access them/these" is only needed once. This also reads a bit like readers shouldn't try to use Evolution with webmail.

Suggestion:
Although Evolution can be used with many webmail systems, such as Yahoo! Mail, Hotmail, and Gmail, you may prefer to use the Firefox web browser to access them via the web.