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[Marc Stewart <marc.c.stewart@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Public bug reported:

Rev. 788
Ch. 3, § "Setting up your Sending options", p. 62 (PDF p. 64)
Types: style; grammar

Manual has:
Enter your username below, in the Username field, for example joe.x.user, or joe.x.user@xxxxxxxxxxx.

"For example" should be followed by a comma. It might also be better
next to "username", since that's what the example is actually of.

Below that, enter your username, for example, joe.x.user, or joe.x.user@xxxxxxxxxxx, in the Username field.
OR
Below that, in the Username field, enter your username, for example, joe.x.user, or joe.x.user@xxxxxxxxxxx.

** Affects: ubuntu-manual
     Importance: Undecided
         Status: New

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Reorder for clarity, and use a comma after "for example", p.62
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/586358
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: New

Bug description:
Rev. 788
Ch. 3, § "Setting up your Sending options", p. 62 (PDF p. 64)
Types: style; grammar

Manual has:
Enter your username below, in the Username field, for example joe.x.user, or joe.x.user@xxxxxxxxxxx.

"For example" should be followed by a comma. It might also be better next to "username", since that's what the example is actually of.

Below that, enter your username, for example, joe.x.user, or joe.x.user@xxxxxxxxxxx, in the Username field.
OR
Below that, in the Username field, enter your username, for example, joe.x.user, or joe.x.user@xxxxxxxxxxx.