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[Marc Stewart <marc.c.stewart@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Public bug reported:

Rev. 788
Ch. 3, § "Understanding the folder list", p. 64 (PDF p. 66)
Type: style

Manual has:
The list of remote folders will be shown with a heading of the name that you have given to the account.

This passive sentence can be rewritten in the active voice.

Suggestion:
The heading for each folder list uses the name you gave to that account.

** Affects: ubuntu-manual
     Importance: Undecided
         Status: New

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Remote folders list, p.64
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: New

Bug description:
Rev. 788
Ch. 3, § "Understanding the folder list", p. 64 (PDF p. 66)
Type: style

Manual has:
The list of remote folders will be shown with a heading of the name that you have given to the account.

This passive sentence can be rewritten in the active voice.

Suggestion:
The heading for each folder list uses the name you gave to that account.