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[Bug 585292] Re: Comma splice on p.19
** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Milestone: None => edition-2
Comma splice on p.19
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: Fix Committed
Ch.1, § "Log in automatically", p. 19 (PDF p. 21)
Manual has a comma splice (before "however"):
This makes your login experience quicker and more convenient, however, if privacy or security are important to you, this option is not recommended.
Either the comma before "however" should be a full stop or semicolon, or the appropriate conjunction, "but", should be employed:
This makes your login experience quicker and more convenient, but if privacy or security are important to you, this option is not recommended.