ubuntu-manual-bugs team mailing list archive

Thread
Date

[Bug 584465] Re: List of three is messed up (page 12)

To: ubuntu-manual-bugs@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
From: Chris Woollard <cwoollard@xxxxxxxxx>
Date: Wed, 18 Aug 2010 07:09:39 -0000
Reply-to: Bug 584465 <584465@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Sender: bounces@xxxxxxxxxxxxx

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
       Status: Fix Committed => Fix Released

-- 
List of three is messed up (page 12)
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/584465
You received this bug notification because you are a member of Ubuntu
Manual Bugs, which is subscribed to Ubuntu Manual.

Status in Ubuntu Manual: Fix Released

Bug description:
the below sentence is a bit messed up. By this I mean that the beginning of each item is different for each item and too confusing.
The last item seems to miss of 'have' and because the first item is a negative, the second and third positive items seem confusing. Pl


This option may be preferred if you don't have access to a CD burner, have limited bandwidth, or a slow Internet connection.

becomes

This option may be preferred if you have limited bandwidth, have a slow Internet connection, or don't have access to a CD burner.