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[Kevin Godby <godbyk@xxxxxxxxx>]

I've used Mandy's suggestion of 'have a slow Internet connection'.

This fix will appear in the second edition.  Thanks!


** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
       Status: New => Fix Committed

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
   Importance: Undecided => Medium

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
     Assignee: (unassigned) => Kevin Godby (godbyk)

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
    Milestone: None => edition-2

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List of three is messed up (page 12)
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/584465
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: Fix Committed

Bug description:
the below sentence is a bit messed up. By this I mean that the beginning of each item is different for each item and too confusing.
The last item seems to miss of 'have' and because the first item is a negative, the second and third positive items seem confusing. Pl


This option may be preferred if you don't have access to a CD burner, have limited bandwidth, or a slow Internet connection.

becomes

This option may be preferred if you have limited bandwidth, have a slow Internet connection, or don't have access to a CD burner.