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[Bug 584492] Re: Grammar improvement required

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From: Chris Woollard <cwoollard@xxxxxxxxx>
Date: Wed, 18 Aug 2010 07:14:22 -0000
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** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
       Status: Fix Committed => Fix Released

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Grammar improvement required
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/584492
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: Fix Released

Bug description:
788

Chp 6 p120

Ubuntu uses the Linux file system structure based on a series of folders in
the root directory.

Not ungrammatical as such, but awkward, needing a separation between "Linux file system structure" and "based on". Also "system structure" is a bit redundant. 
Suggestion: "Ubuntu uses the Linux file system, which is based on a series of folders in the root directory."