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[Bug 585361] Re: Suggest comma before "such as" on p.32
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Status: Fix Committed => Fix Released
Suggest comma before "such as" on p.32
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Ch. 2, § "Customizing your desktop", p. 32 (PDF p. 34)
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Now [...] let’s take a look at customizing some of its features such as modifying the behavior of your panels, or changing the look and feel of your desktop.
Since the sentence could end after "features", this particular use of "such as" is better preceded by a comma, such as it is at many other points in the manual.