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[Marc Stewart <marc.c.stewart@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Public bug reported:

Rev. 788
Ch. 2, § "Customizing your desktop", p. 32 (PDF p. 34)
Type: copy edit suggestion

Manual has:
Now [...] let’s take a look at customizing some of its features such as modifying the behavior of your panels, or changing the look and feel of your desktop.

Since the sentence could end after "features", this particular use of
"such as" is better preceded by a comma, such as it is at many other
points in the manual.

** Affects: ubuntu-manual
     Importance: Undecided
         Status: New

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Suggest comma before "such as" on p.32
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: New

Bug description:
Rev. 788
Ch. 2, § "Customizing your desktop", p. 32 (PDF p. 34)
Type: copy edit suggestion

Manual has:
Now [...] let’s take a look at customizing some of its features such as modifying the behavior of your panels, or changing the look and feel of your desktop.

Since the sentence could end after "features", this particular use of "such as" is better preceded by a comma, such as it is at many other points in the manual.