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[Bug 585902] Re: "The" > "a" and reducing repetition, p.56

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From: Chris Woollard <cwoollard@xxxxxxxxx>
Date: Wed, 18 Aug 2010 07:26:22 -0000
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** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
       Status: Fix Committed => Fix Released

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"The" > "a" and reducing repetition, p.56
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: Fix Released

Bug description:
Rev. 788
Ch. 3, § "Searching within a page", p. 56 (PDF p. 58)
Type: style

Manual has:
You may want to look for specific text within a web page you are viewing. To find text within the page you are currently viewing in Firefox:

The second sentence has it right, referring to *the* page you are currently viewing. The first sentence should follow suit, and not be so indefinite. The second sentence can also be less repetitive.

Suggestion:
You may want to look for specific text within the web page you are viewing. To find text within the current page in Firefox:

References

[Bug 585902] [NEW] "The" > "a" and reducing repetition, p.56
From: Marc Stewart, 2010-05-26