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[Marc Stewart <marc.c.stewart@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Public bug reported:

Rev. 788
Ch. 3, § "Searching within a page", p. 56 (PDF p. 58)
Type: style

Manual has:
You may want to look for specific text within a web page you are viewing. To find text within the page you are currently viewing in Firefox:

The second sentence has it right, referring to *the* page you are
currently viewing. The first sentence should follow suit, and not be so
indefinite. The second sentence can also be less repetitive.

Suggestion:
You may want to look for specific text within the web page you are viewing. To find text within the current page in Firefox:

** Affects: ubuntu-manual
     Importance: Undecided
         Status: New

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"The" > "a" and reducing repetition, p.56
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/585902
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: New

Bug description:
Rev. 788
Ch. 3, § "Searching within a page", p. 56 (PDF p. 58)
Type: style

Manual has:
You may want to look for specific text within a web page you are viewing. To find text within the page you are currently viewing in Firefox:

The second sentence has it right, referring to *the* page you are currently viewing. The first sentence should follow suit, and not be so indefinite. The second sentence can also be less repetitive.

Suggestion:
You may want to look for specific text within the web page you are viewing. To find text within the current page in Firefox: