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Message #00883
[Bug 585380] Re: Superfluous comma before "and" on p.34
** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Status: Fix Committed => Fix Released
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Superfluous comma before "and" on p.34
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/585380
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: Fix Released
Bug description:
Rev. 788
Ch. 2, § "Workspaces", p. 34 (PDF p. 36)
Type: grammar
Manual has:
In this case you can still change between workspaces by moving the mouse over the workspace switcher, and scrolling the mouse wheel.
Moving the mouse over the workspace switcher and scrolling the mouse comprise a single action, not a list of options, so there shouldn't be a comma separating them, although one after "in this case" wouldn't hurt:
In this case, you can still change between workspaces by moving the mouse over the workspace switcher and scrolling the mouse wheel.
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