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[Marc Stewart <marc.c.stewart@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Public bug reported:

Rev. 788
Ch. 2, § "Workspaces", p. 34 (PDF p. 36)
Type: grammar

Manual has:
In this case you can still change between workspaces by moving the mouse over the workspace switcher, and scrolling the mouse wheel.

Moving the mouse over the workspace switcher and scrolling the mouse
comprise a single action, not a list of options, so there shouldn't be a
comma separating them, although one after "in this case" wouldn't hurt:

In this case, you can still change between workspaces by moving the
mouse over the workspace switcher and scrolling the mouse wheel.

** Affects: ubuntu-manual
     Importance: Undecided
         Status: New

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Superfluous comma before "and" on p.34
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/585380
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: New

Bug description:
Rev. 788
Ch. 2, § "Workspaces", p. 34 (PDF p. 36)
Type: grammar

Manual has:
In this case you can still change between workspaces by moving the mouse over the workspace switcher, and scrolling the mouse wheel.

Moving the mouse over the workspace switcher and scrolling the mouse comprise a single action, not a list of options, so there shouldn't be a comma separating them, although one after "in this case" wouldn't hurt:

In this case, you can still change between workspaces by moving the mouse over the workspace switcher and scrolling the mouse wheel.