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[Bug 586316] Re: Comma consistency, p.60
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Status: Fix Committed => Fix Released
Comma consistency, p.60
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Ch. 3, § "Running Evolution for the first time", p. 60 (PDF p. 62)
Almost every paragraph in this section starts with a time indication followed by a comma. But the second paragraph does not follow suit:
When Evolution starts[,] you should see the “Evolution Setup Assistant” window, welcoming you to Evolution.
Aside from consistency, a comma here helps indicate that "starts" is being used as the intransitive rather than transitive verb "to start", helping machine translations and less able readers.