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[Andrew <rugby471@xxxxxxxxx>]

Public bug reported:

In the below sentence, "some things that work very differently" should
be rephrased to "differences". As well as this being the antonym of the
word previously used (similarities) it is a lot less confusing and
simpler.

You will no doubt notice many similarities to both Microsoft Windows and
Mac OSX, as well as some things that work very differently.

becomes

You will no doubt notice many similarities to both Microsoft Windows and
Mac OSX, as well as some differences.

** Affects: ubuntu-manual
     Importance: Undecided
         Status: New

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Rephrase "some things that work very differently" (page 9)
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/584460
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: New

Bug description:
In the below sentence, "some things that work very differently" should be rephrased to "differences". As well as this being the antonym of the word previously used (similarities) it is a lot less confusing and simpler.

You will no doubt notice many similarities to both Microsoft Windows and Mac OSX, as well as some things that work very differently.

becomes

You will no doubt notice many similarities to both Microsoft Windows and Mac OSX, as well as some differences.