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[Mark Hepworth <hepworth.mark@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Public bug reported:

Chp 6 p123

"Apt is extremely versatile and encompasses several tools, however, the
most commonly used apt tool is apt-get."

An overcomplicated sentence. Simplify: "Apt is extremely versatile and
include several tools, the most commonly used of which is apt-get."

** Affects: ubuntu-manual
     Importance: Undecided
         Status: New

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Overcomplicated sentence
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Bug description:
Chp 6 p123

"Apt is extremely versatile and encompasses several tools, however, the most commonly used apt tool is apt-get."

An overcomplicated sentence. Simplify: "Apt is extremely versatile and include several tools, the most commonly used of which is apt-get."