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[Mandy Zhou <zhou.mandy@xxxxxxxxx>]

Public bug reported:

Version: 788
Chapter and page number: 1, page 12 (page 14 of the PDF)
Type: grammar

The first sentence of the second paragraph under 'The Live CD' reads,
"The speed at which your computer can read information from a CD is much
slower than reading information from a hard drive". The sentence
structure is a bit off; a better alternative would be "The speed at
which your computer can read information from a CD is much slower than
that at which it can read information from a hard drive".

** Affects: ubuntu-manual
     Importance: Undecided
         Status: New

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Poor sentence structure on page 12
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Bug description:
Version: 788
Chapter and page number: 1, page 12 (page 14 of the PDF)
Type: grammar

The first sentence of the second paragraph under 'The Live CD' reads, "The speed at which your computer can read information from a CD is much slower than reading information from a hard drive". The sentence structure is a bit off; a better alternative would be "The speed at which your computer can read information from a CD is much slower than that at which it can read information from a hard drive".