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Re: Fwd: [Branch ~ubuntu-manual/ubuntu-manual/xenial] Rev 13: Cleaned up install from USB stick section.

 

Hello Pravin,
Good work! I had a look at your review on Browsing the Web and I will adjust the text as you suggested, since I am responsible for this section. As soon as this is done, I will change "Needs Review" to "Ready for Release" on our shared spreadsheet. I think it will work the way you did it; you added comment in the Notes column and sent your review to our list where everyone can see it. @Miles Robinson will you have a look at Pravin's notes on Getting Online, please.

O, I see now that Sylvie already sent you a copy of the pdf file, thanks Sylvie.
Regards,
Hannie

Op 03-04-16 om 09:52 schreef Pravin Dhayfule:
Hi,
Based on the PDF I have reviewed the Working with Ubuntu sub sections rows 18 to 24. Attached is the document containing my review comments. Not sure what to update in the sheet.

Regards


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On Sun, Apr 3, 2016 at 8:50 AM, Pravin Dhayfule <pravin@xxxxxxxxxxxx <mailto:pravin@xxxxxxxxxxxx>> wrote:

    Thanks a lot. This helps.

    On 02-Apr-2016 11:41 pm, "Sylvie Gallet" <sylvie.gallet@xxxxxxx
    <mailto:sylvie.gallet@xxxxxxx>> wrote:

        Hi!

            Can some one provide the latest PDF file for review? It's
            difficult to
            read through tex files.
            Regards


        https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/1995567/ubuntu-manual.pdf




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