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[Mark Maglana <mark.maglana@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Public bug reported:

- [x] This doc is inaccurate in this way: Wrong use of the word "comprise"
- [ ] This is a doc addition request.
- [x] I have a fix to the document that I can paste below including example: input and output. 

"Nova is comprised of multiple server processes"

"to comprise" means "to be composed of" so the above phrase, would read
as "Nova is composed of of multiple server processes."

The correct phrased would either be:

"Nova comprises multiple server processes" or "Nova is composed of
multiple server processes"

-----------------------------------
Release:  on 2018-10-30 10:13:24
SHA: 6e4ab9714cc0ca147f61997aa7b68f88185ade5c
Source: https://opendev.org/openstack/nova/src/doc/source/user/architecture.rst
URL: https://docs.openstack.org/nova/latest/user/architecture.html

** Affects: nova
     Importance: Undecided
         Status: New


** Tags: doc

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https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/1831309

Title:
  Nova System Architecture in nova

Status in OpenStack Compute (nova):
  New

Bug description:
  - [x] This doc is inaccurate in this way: Wrong use of the word "comprise"
  - [ ] This is a doc addition request.
  - [x] I have a fix to the document that I can paste below including example: input and output. 

  "Nova is comprised of multiple server processes"

  "to comprise" means "to be composed of" so the above phrase, would
  read as "Nova is composed of of multiple server processes."

  The correct phrased would either be:

  "Nova comprises multiple server processes" or "Nova is composed of
  multiple server processes"

  -----------------------------------
  Release:  on 2018-10-30 10:13:24
  SHA: 6e4ab9714cc0ca147f61997aa7b68f88185ade5c
  Source: https://opendev.org/openstack/nova/src/doc/source/user/architecture.rst
  URL: https://docs.openstack.org/nova/latest/user/architecture.html

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