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Reviewed:  https://review.opendev.org/663175
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/nova/commit/?id=ebddacf001bfc7bf0a1388ef3fd166d0996b09cc
Submitter: Zuul
Branch:    master

commit ebddacf001bfc7bf0a1388ef3fd166d0996b09cc
Author: Takashi NATSUME <natsume.takashi@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Date:   Wed Jun 5 09:00:00 2019 +0900

    Replace 'is comprised of' with 'comprises'
    
    Replace 'is comprised of' with 'comprises'
    because the 'is comprised of' is disputed use.
    
    Change-Id: If66d2e4583b00102d52635457f3c3f8c2adee1be
    Closes-Bug: #1831309


** Changed in: nova
       Status: In Progress => Fix Released

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Title:
  Nova System Architecture in nova

Status in OpenStack Compute (nova):
  Fix Released

Bug description:
  - [x] This doc is inaccurate in this way: Wrong use of the word "comprise"
  - [ ] This is a doc addition request.
  - [x] I have a fix to the document that I can paste below including example: input and output. 

  "Nova is comprised of multiple server processes"

  "to comprise" means "to be composed of" so the above phrase, would
  read as "Nova is composed of of multiple server processes."

  The correct phrased would either be:

  "Nova comprises multiple server processes" or "Nova is composed of
  multiple server processes"

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  Release:  on 2018-10-30 10:13:24
  SHA: 6e4ab9714cc0ca147f61997aa7b68f88185ade5c
  Source: https://opendev.org/openstack/nova/src/doc/source/user/architecture.rst
  URL: https://docs.openstack.org/nova/latest/user/architecture.html

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