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This bug was fixed in the package ubuntu-docs - 14.04.1

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ubuntu-docs (14.04.1) trusty; urgency=low

  [ Kevin Godby ]
  * configure.in, html/Makefile, html/ubuntu.xsl, whats-new.page:
    - Bumped version number to 14.04.
  * Typo on printing-cancel-job.page fixed (LP: #1231655).

  [ Little Girl ]
  * ubuntu-help/C/check_status.sh:
    - Added the EXTINCT listing for status to display references to
      previous releases.
    - Added a section on how to use status tags.
    - Fixed the script so that it will find revision elements with stub
      attributes.
  * accounts-create.page:
    - Improved wording (LP: #1220971).
  * Improved structure and minor tweaking of many pages.

  [ Doug Smythies ]
  * ubuntu-help/Makefile.am:
    - Added missing .png files (LP: #1245031).
  * disk-capacity.page:
    - Clarify disk usage analyzer (LP: #1059535).
  * Link corrections so that yelp-check ids will pass.
  * display-dual-monitors.page:
    - Fixed 2 unmatched block elements: section html compile errors.
  * Some occurrences of GNOME only code and .png file requests removed
    (LP: #1232708).
  * PO files updated:
    - Exported the latest translations from Launchpad.
    - Four new languages: et, eu, tg, th.

  [ Benjamin Kerensa ]
  * Update of the MAINTAINERS file.
  * Minor tweaks.

  [ Gunnar Hjalmarsson ]
  * The group "Add & remove software" highlighted on index.page by
    creation of the guide page addremove.page. Related links tweaking.
  * shell-guest-session.page:
    - Added description of how you can disable the guest session
      feature (LP: #1076740).
  * Creation of prefs-language-install.page.
  * keyboard-layouts.page:
    - Rewritten to reflect the "System Settings -> Text Entry" design
      (LP: #1242626).
  * tips-specialchars.page:
    - Sections "Compose key" and "Input methods" removed.
  * debian/control:
    - Bump Standards-Version to 3.9.5.
  * Updated ubuntu-help.pot.

  [ Greg Beam ]
  * The "Online accounts" pages improved, including:
    - Grammar fixes on accounts-whyadd.page (LP: #1220983).
    - Removal of accounts-create.page (LP: #1220971).
    - System settings steps worded as on other pages (LP: #1268775).
  * addremove-install-synaptic.page:
    - Grammar fix (LP: #1222288).
  * Fixed validation errors (LP: #1268834).
  * Note style corrected (changed from "info" to "tip", LP: #1269100).

  [ Jeffery To ]
  * power-hibernate.page:
    - Instructions for re-enabling hibernation updated (LP: #1232814).

  [ Shaun McCance ]
  * html/ubuntu.xsl:
    - Link trail no longer needs override (LP: #1275818).
  * Changes to pass strict validation (LP: #1275866).
 -- Gunnar Hjalmarsson <gunnarhj@xxxxxxxxxx>   Fri, 14 Feb 2014 18:07:00 +0100

** Changed in: ubuntu-docs (Ubuntu)
       Status: In Progress => Fix Released

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Title:
  accounts-whyadd.page grammar fixes

Status in “ubuntu-docs” package in Ubuntu:
  Fix Released

Bug description:
  GIVEN:
  Adding your accounts brings your choice of services like calendar, chat and e-mail straight to your desktop and makes the information of the services a seamless part of your user experience. By adding accounts you can easily keep in touch with services of different accounts, like chats, at the same time. Just set your account once and every time you start your computer all the accounts and services you've added are ready for you.

  I think it needs a lot more commas to facilitate reading.

  PROPOSED:
  Adding your accounts brings your choice of services like calendar, chat, and e-mail straight to your desktop.  It also makes the information of the services a seamless part of your user experience. By adding accounts, you can easily keep in touch with services of different accounts, like chats, at the same time. Just set your account once, and every time you start your computer, all the accounts and services you've added are ready for you.

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