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Message #00479
[Bug 1220971] Re: accounts-create.page simplify a phrase
This bug was fixed in the package ubuntu-docs - 14.04.1
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ubuntu-docs (14.04.1) trusty; urgency=low
[ Kevin Godby ]
* configure.in, html/Makefile, html/ubuntu.xsl, whats-new.page:
- Bumped version number to 14.04.
* Typo on printing-cancel-job.page fixed (LP: #1231655).
[ Little Girl ]
* ubuntu-help/C/check_status.sh:
- Added the EXTINCT listing for status to display references to
previous releases.
- Added a section on how to use status tags.
- Fixed the script so that it will find revision elements with stub
attributes.
* accounts-create.page:
- Improved wording (LP: #1220971).
* Improved structure and minor tweaking of many pages.
[ Doug Smythies ]
* ubuntu-help/Makefile.am:
- Added missing .png files (LP: #1245031).
* disk-capacity.page:
- Clarify disk usage analyzer (LP: #1059535).
* Link corrections so that yelp-check ids will pass.
* display-dual-monitors.page:
- Fixed 2 unmatched block elements: section html compile errors.
* Some occurrences of GNOME only code and .png file requests removed
(LP: #1232708).
* PO files updated:
- Exported the latest translations from Launchpad.
- Four new languages: et, eu, tg, th.
[ Benjamin Kerensa ]
* Update of the MAINTAINERS file.
* Minor tweaks.
[ Gunnar Hjalmarsson ]
* The group "Add & remove software" highlighted on index.page by
creation of the guide page addremove.page. Related links tweaking.
* shell-guest-session.page:
- Added description of how you can disable the guest session
feature (LP: #1076740).
* Creation of prefs-language-install.page.
* keyboard-layouts.page:
- Rewritten to reflect the "System Settings -> Text Entry" design
(LP: #1242626).
* tips-specialchars.page:
- Sections "Compose key" and "Input methods" removed.
* debian/control:
- Bump Standards-Version to 3.9.5.
* Updated ubuntu-help.pot.
[ Greg Beam ]
* The "Online accounts" pages improved, including:
- Grammar fixes on accounts-whyadd.page (LP: #1220983).
- Removal of accounts-create.page (LP: #1220971).
- System settings steps worded as on other pages (LP: #1268775).
* addremove-install-synaptic.page:
- Grammar fix (LP: #1222288).
* Fixed validation errors (LP: #1268834).
* Note style corrected (changed from "info" to "tip", LP: #1269100).
[ Jeffery To ]
* power-hibernate.page:
- Instructions for re-enabling hibernation updated (LP: #1232814).
[ Shaun McCance ]
* html/ubuntu.xsl:
- Link trail no longer needs override (LP: #1275818).
* Changes to pass strict validation (LP: #1275866).
-- Gunnar Hjalmarsson <gunnarhj@xxxxxxxxxx> Fri, 14 Feb 2014 18:07:00 +0100
** Changed in: ubuntu-docs (Ubuntu)
Status: Fix Committed => Fix Released
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https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/1220971
Title:
accounts-create.page simplify a phrase
Status in “ubuntu-docs” package in Ubuntu:
Fix Released
Bug description:
There is the note under Step #5:
"...If this is true of the service you wish to register, you will need to use an alternative method to create an account."
s/is true of/applies to
Sounds more direct that way.
Another one.
"You will typically be asked for some personal details such as username and password."
Suggestion: You will be asked for your username and password.
Conciseness.
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