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[Bug 584492] Re: Grammar improvement required


To the first issue of '/home/ubuntu-manual'.  I'm going to establish
some placeholder formatting that will fix this soon.

To the second issue: I agree that the phrasing is a bit awkward.
However, there is a difference between the file system and the

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
       Status: Fix Committed => Confirmed

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
   Importance: Low => Medium

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
     Assignee: Elan Kugelmass (epkugelmass) => Kevin Godby (godbyk)

Grammar improvement required
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: Confirmed

Bug description:

Chp 6 p120

Ubuntu uses the Linux file system structure based on a series of folders in
the root directory.

Not ungrammatical as such, but awkward, needing a separation between "Linux file system structure" and "based on". Also "system structure" is a bit redundant. 
Suggestion: "Ubuntu uses the Linux file system, which is based on a series of folders in the root directory."