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[Marc Stewart <marc.c.stewart@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Public bug reported:

Rev. 788
Ch. 3, § "Searching the web for words selected in a web page", p. 55 (PDF p.57)
Type: style

Manual has:
Firefox should open a new tab which should contain search results for your highlighted words using the currently selected search engine.

Repeating "should" makes Firefox seem flaky. And the sentence could do
with breaking up a little.

Suggestion:
Firefox should open a new tab containing search results for your highlighted words, found using the currently selected search engine.

** Affects: ubuntu-manual
     Importance: Undecided
         Status: New

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One "should" will do, p.55
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/585897
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: New

Bug description:
Rev. 788
Ch. 3, § "Searching the web for words selected in a web page", p. 55 (PDF p.57)
Type: style

Manual has:
Firefox should open a new tab which should contain search results for your highlighted words using the currently selected search engine.

Repeating "should" makes Firefox seem flaky. And the sentence could do with breaking up a little.

Suggestion:
Firefox should open a new tab containing search results for your highlighted words, found using the currently selected search engine.