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Message #00932
Re: State of the title page
OK, me first. ;) And sorry in advance for me being too hard.
- I don't like that "wave" motive on "D" and "B".
- Simple idea on "A" and "C" looks fine for me. Except those aubergine
icons on "C". They just don't have a cover of another aubergine anything. ;)
- On concept "E" on the other hand the aubergine looks nice. And I mean
both icons and that stripe on the top of the page. ... well maybe that it's
a bit empty (stripe) but it's not a big deal.
- And finally "F" which is with its green WAY out of line. (Wrong link by
the way).
<no_flame>I miss Lynx.</no_flame>
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Regards
Martin Lukeš
P.S.: Please keep the communication history
On Sun, Mar 7, 2010 at 9:39 PM, Thorsten Wilms <t_w_@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> Hi!
>
> Input from Vish (including a "computer" icon) and the new visual
> identity of Ubuntu led to a row of test PDFs:
>
>
> https://wiki.ubuntu.com/ubuntu-manual/Artwork?action=AttachFile&do=get&target=manual_cover_2010-03-07_a.pdf
>
> https://wiki.ubuntu.com/ubuntu-manual/Artwork?action=AttachFile&do=get&target=manual_cover_2010-03-07_b.pdf
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> https://wiki.ubuntu.com/ubuntu-manual/Artwork?action=AttachFile&do=get&target=manual_cover_2010-03-07_c.pdf
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> https://wiki.ubuntu.com/ubuntu-manual/Artwork?action=AttachFile&do=get&target=manual_cover_2010-03-07_d.pdf
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> https://wiki.ubuntu.com/ubuntu-manual/Artwork?action=AttachFile&do=get&target=manual_cover_2010-03-07_e.pdf
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> https://wiki.ubuntu.com/ubuntu-manual/Artwork?action=AttachFile&do=get&target=manual_cover_2010-03-07_e.pdf
>
>
> The Orange and Aubergine might have to change slightly, once there are
> official values.
>
> As Vish pointed out, having a first look at these, using much or any
> Aubergine is problematic, as Mark Shuttleworth stated:
> "The use of Aubergine indicates Commercial involvement of one form or
> another, while Orange is a signal of community engagement."
>
> But recalling
> https://wiki.ubuntu.com/ubuntu-manual/Artwork#Tone%20and%20Message
> huge amounts of Orange just appear too aggressive, while Aubergine hits
> the tone rather well. It's far from the only option, if we don't tie us
> to the official artwork that closely.
>
> Giving feedback, please try to describe what you see, what works or
> doesn't work for you and why you think either is the case.
>
>
> --
> Thorsten Wilms
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