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[Mandy Zhou <zhou.mandy@xxxxxxxxx>]

Public bug reported:

Version: 788
Chapter and page number: Prologue, p. 9 (p. 11 of the PDF)
Type: grammar/sentence structure/style

The second sentence of the second bullet point under 'Is Ubuntu right
for you?' reads "For the vast majority of tasks that people use their
computers for every day [...]", which sounds rather awkward. An
alternative is "For the vast majority of everyday tasks that computer
use facilitates [...]".

** Affects: ubuntu-manual
     Importance: Undecided
         Status: New

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Awkward wording on page 9; rephrasing recommended
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/584633
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: New

Bug description:
Version: 788
Chapter and page number: Prologue, p. 9 (p. 11 of the PDF)
Type: grammar/sentence structure/style

The second sentence of the second bullet point under 'Is Ubuntu right for you?' reads "For the vast majority of tasks that people use their computers for every day [...]", which sounds rather awkward. An alternative is "For the vast majority of everyday tasks that computer use facilitates [...]".