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Public bug reported:

Version: 788
Chapter and page number: Prologue, p. 10 (p. 12 of the PDF)
Type: usage/grammar

The first line of the first paragraph reads "[...] largest market, where
they can make the most profit [...]"; the word 'where' is used
incorrectly and awkwardly here. More appropriate is the phrase 'in
which'.

** Affects: ubuntu-manual
     Importance: Undecided
         Status: New

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Incorrect usage of the word 'where' on page 10
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/584634
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: New

Bug description:
Version: 788
Chapter and page number: Prologue, p. 10 (p. 12 of the PDF)
Type: usage/grammar

The first line of the first paragraph reads "[...] largest market, where they can make the most profit [...]"; the word 'where' is used incorrectly and awkwardly here. More appropriate is the phrase 'in which'.