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[Hannie Dumoleyn <lafeber-dumoleyn2@xxxxxxxxx>]

It looks fine to me. Perhaps you should add a "," like this:
A package management system, also know as a package manager, is a 
collection of tools...
Hannie

Op 08-04-13 18:46, Sylvie Gallet schreef:
> Hello!
>
> I started reviewing the Software management section, and made a 
> suggestion about the first sentences.  Hope I did it right: I edited 
> software-management.tex and did the pull/commit/push to rev 101.
>
> Can someone check it out and let me know if it's OK?
>
> Thank you
>
>         - Sylvie