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Message #06232
"This page allows you to..."
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To:
Launchpad Community Development Team <launchpad-dev@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
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From:
Matthew Paul Thomas <mpt@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
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Date:
Mon, 24 Jan 2011 11:33:37 -0600
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In-reply-to:
<1294693251.1420.15.camel@solstice>
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Organization:
Canonical Ltd
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Curtis Hovey wrote on 10/01/11 15:00:
>...
> https://dev.launchpad.net/LEP/DerivativeDistributions#Mockups
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> +newseries
"This page allows you to add a new distribution series"
In <https://dev.launchpad.net/UserInterfaceWording> a few years ago, I
proposed that no Launchpad page should intentionally contain the phrase
"this page".
The window in which you are reading e-mail right now almost certainly
doesn't say "this window allows you to read e-mail". In the same way,
the purpose of a page should be obvious from the contents of the page.
When a form page has a one-sentence introduction, it's easy to briefly
hint at the purpose of, consequences of, and/or next step after the
task, without referring to the page itself. In this case, for example:
"Once you've registered a distribution series, it can be initialized
with packages from a parent series."
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mpt
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